It seems you've captured in this song what could be the very essence of the passage of time.
You have truely made a wonder of a track here, and I thank you for the experience.
The sun rises once again, to show forth new work upon the farm, today is different however, the day shall last longer than normal days have, this day is different from others... it is the first day of Summer, the longest day of the year. The farmer enters his fields working harder than he has ever worked before, not concentrating on anything else. From plowing, planting, and more. As the sun begins to set the farmer rests himself. Then the full moon rises in the sky and it is time to begin work again, this full moon has cast such a light that now more work can be done upon the farm. The animals are sleeping yes, but the farmer is still working through the night. As the farmer is nearing the end of his work he goes back into his house and sleeps until tomorrow when he begins another day of work... he knows it probably won't last forever, but he'll keep going until there is nothing left he can do. The farm shall stand as long as the farmer stands for it, the farm shall stand as long as the farmer works for it, and the farm shall stand as long as the farmer tries for it.
Fantastic piece! I did notice the changes in it and thus I just had to write another story for it, other than recreating or building from my previous story I made this one a bit different to move with your added and extended changes. The notes all float so well together. You have taken your own perfection and made it more better, I honestly didn't think it was possible for you to add on to your already true masterpiece! Excellent Work!
Thank you so much for this review, Great One! This is one heck of a worker if he plowed a whole garden in one day :)
But really, I greatly appreciate your reviews and stories, they often add a diverse way of listening to the music than what you would first hear.
this is a sweet sound a all that work that went into it. this is so good that you could be counted as great an artist as meastrorange, i mean is almost perfect. but only problem is that the fading is a bit to arupt so keep that in mind for ferther peices. (the ending fade was perfect, the fading i'm worried about is the ones in the middle of the song. other then that its a peice of art.
this one made me think. Sort of about the direction I am heading, and the way I live. It sucks compared to the guy I can see in this piece.
Hey... ummm... I kind of feel bashful about this, but since your the top ranked classical composer right now, could you please listen to my melancholy piece. And if you have the time could you listen to the others. I promise you will not be disappointed!!!
but i feel that the original was better. Both reveal truth to the listener but the original was shorter, and thus sweeter. Both pieces touch my heart somewhere deep, but the original seems to hold on that much longer.I truly commend you on creating a piece that captures simplicity itself, it makes me want to come back and listen to it over and over untill the end of time. Good luck and good health...continue making songs like this...I beg of you.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.