You’ve structured the introduction of each element really well, maintaining a good balance—it's neither overwhelming nor underwhelming. You creatively introduce new elements, which is rare to see. It's also uncommon to find people here using Logic Pro X.
What I’m honestly really tired of seeing in the Author Comments is phrases like, "I didn't really feel like finishing this," or, "this is an unfinished song." I’m exhausted by that trope—
It takes away so much focus from the listening experience when you post a song but then say it’s unfinished. If you’ve posted it, the song is finished—end of discussion. If it’s a short song, it’s a short song. There’s nothing wrong with that; in fact, it can be a positive since people often have short attention spans and are more likely to listen to a shorter track.
@Pciphidic, why do you make music?
@Pciphidic, how did you discover Newgrounds?
@Pciphidic, what are your creative goals?