I dont hear the drum and bass in this
but regardless its good for a first track.
-Cool Drum Patterns
-The track doesnt change at all
-The synth lines are predictable and the synth is not particularly interesting
-You need a louder bassline, and a lead melody. Maybe a nice pad in the background. at the 1:20ish mark its a perfect time for you to introduce something new
Keep at it man!
Thanks for the review, it really helps a lot!