Great rhymes and rhythm! There’s very strong storytelling in your acapella, and I appreciate how well-formulated the structure of your rap is. You have a great understanding of constructing bars.
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I'm not entirely proud of this one, but at least I got it out my system. It's night and tomorrow finna be an early rise. I'm heading in to get my back cracked again, before I get to work with sites.
Some days inspiration really wanes... such is life. But as soon as you start it comes back in stride. Might have to force it for a part. It turns to a work of art. Before you know it is dark and the writing's alright!
More so not proud of annunciation and pace. With acapellas it's clear sometimes that it's not all in place. And the adlibs are nae great. Blame it on my energy waning and lack of time. But never fear the nothingness: as long as you've a mind.
Onwards; onto the morrow!
Lyrics: https://cyberd.org/inktober-13-a-sunday-when-all-is-said-and-done-lyrics.html
Cyberdevil responds:
Thank you! Storytelling really was the foundation of rap back in the day, oughta practice on keeping a red thread and really telling a particular experience, oftentimes I feel my thoughts are just all over the place. For the sake of rhyme more than reflection. But better and better, forever and ever! Never settle just push that pedal and riiiise.
I know what you mean in that this one didn't stand out as much as other ones this month, but you're already setting a high bar for yourself and I don't think this one was bad at all :) Reminds me of a previous year's acapella actually, though can't recall the track specifically. Lyrics are still reflective in a nice way. Delivery sounded great to me too :) Almost halfway there now!n Keep it up CD!
Cyberdevil responds:
Well thank you Nick. :) Indeed the bar rises, gotta remind myself to make more time for the fun in this sometimes; let go. Can make a great day even of one that starts slow; not as motivating. Indeed, I shall keep pushing till it's over! Appreciate the encouragement and rotor!
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