Through out time, those of the female persuasion have been the sweetest and most gentle of souls when compared to males. But there is a sect of females who can be as vandictive and powerful as anyone this world has known. Thus, I wrote chess. Listen as the game ensues.
Recorded with Audacity, using an electric guitar, bass, and keyboard. Yes...a crappy keyboard. I know the drums suck. Drums are actually a nail in my side. I don't know any freeware that sounds good...I would be happy for some suggestions. Vocals are just me, double recorded, like most of my songs.
Good Melody
You had a terrific melody, but your lyrics destroyed the song. You weren't even singing the song either, you were completely whining through the whole song. Your song sounds like one of those emo songs when Chess isn't all emo. You need to look more deeper into what you're writing. So find a better writer and find a better singer says this critic.
I actually did look deep into what I was writing. It's an analogy. Meaning that of course Chess isn't all Emo. That's like you commenting that you can't write about a sad relationship, because relationships aren't all sad. If you don't like emo, fine. But don't vote me down because of your personal taste. Vote me down because the song blows, lol.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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