I'd have to agree with the dude below me
the beggining was good but the end didn't come out to well mabey you should change the midi to piano instead of trying to make a techno-ish song that kind of this song best suits the ambient genre or video game you should try to change it,I'm not going to vote because then that will kill all chance of anyone hearing your song
Well its started goo the the ending was massivly random and remimnded me of a video game that you would despritly like to mute.
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