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A Broken Man

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The story of a man who has been thrown away by the world. The story of a man who has been trounced upon, crushed, and ignore. A story of his return.

Pt. 1 ( 0:00 - 2:00 ) - The Fall
Pt. 2 ( 2:00 - 4:57 ) - Depression
Pt. 3 ( 4:57 - 6:31 ) - Revival



Some parts sounds kinda, well, off though. The violin in the first part sounded kinda wierd. Also the audio feels a little bare. I like the piano quite a bit in the second part and though. In my opinion the last two movements were the best. It coud use some polishing up though. Keep at it :)


crazyguy832 responds:

First off, thanks for the review.

Second... yeah, I figured at least a couple people won't of liked this because of the violin in the first part. One too many dissonant chords? Aye, I suppose so. Definetely agree I could have done that better, but whenever I listen to it I can't tell what I should change (as, to my ears, it sounds good, even though I know it theoretically shouldn't... heh... been playing piano way too long, ears have gotten used to dissonant chords working in music, suppose I need a bit more practice with them, however).


Ah, well, I suppose I'll just have to leave it at that. Thanks for the comments!



interesting song. Sounds Midi'ish, yet pretty good. Looks like you've done a lot in this. Good job.
I like the piano lol.

crazyguy832 responds:

Haha, thanks a lot. Yeah, I agree it sounds a little midi'ish. I still don't have tons of experience with Fruity Loops, so I'm still getting used to making stuff sound... erm... more realistic (? :P). The piano part was fun to write, as I actually got to sit down and play an instrument for a while instead of just hitting buttons at my computer (lack a MIDI keyboard at the moment... hopefully will pick one up in the summer). If I had a good mic I would've recorded it instead of just sticking it into FL, but oh well, it's still my favourite of the three parts.

Thanks for the review.


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2.19 / 5.00

Apr 10, 2008
9:35 PM EDT
File Info
6 MB
6 min 33 sec

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