I'm pretty sure the demo allows you to EQ...
or did they take out that too now? it used to be you could do everything but save...well if you get the full version:
+Add reverb for depth
+Put some compression on this because its clipping all over the place
+Bass sounds weak, maybe try upping the bass and trebs on the actual control, not sure how to fix that. It might round out your tone a little.
Pretty good playing tho. You switch styles a lot but its all gravy. I like the intro and how the melodies start off heroic sounding, and then the track turns pretty solemn. Keep it up!