I listened to it in full, and I really like the progression. The tension in the chords contrasts nicely with the indecisive melody. However, the hi-hat that starts around 0:40 doesn't quite convince me; it feels a bit too “blank,” especially since it repeats. Maybe applying a filter behind it or using a different hi-hat sound could enhance it.

Aside from that, the instrumentation is good; the piano paired with synthesizers works well—simple but effective. However, I believe that for such a long track, it would have been better to incorporate more instruments. The final decision to add that bass is excellent; it truly feels like you're approaching something significant.

Overall, I see potential here! New follow—just don’t give up and never stop dreaming