And I Review
Very... fuzzy. The guitar is so distored is sounds like a fuzz. However, I really enjoy the different effects you've put on the guitars. Reminds me of a metal Mars Volta without the extreme changes in tempo/dynamics.
If that is a screaming voice I can hear, I can't hear it very well and such may need tweaking up for the re-recording (should you get round to it anytime!)
The song isn't repetetive as such and has some good changes and chord progressions throughout. The soloing above the top (if this is to be made into a song) would be better if use more sparsley as to show off your skills a bit better. The guitar soloing behind DragonForce is completely intense... but you get a bit sick of hearing it all the time. If you know you're good, by all means show it off, but not to that extent as people tend to think 'well... this is fucking boring' (that's my view on DragonForce, not you!)
So, my ideas to make it better would be:
- Turn up the vocals
- Get rid off the fuzzy distortion
- Make gaps for your soloing
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.