Some of the instruments at the beginning seem to be playing a bit out of scale(not sure if that's intentional, if it is one thing you could do is have this instruments get reintroduced but play on pitch. the effect would be much more effective that way)
also the second section goes on for a bit to long.
I do enjoy the overall composition
and 2:26 - 2:48 I really enjoy
banani7-89 
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