bass is like beating my ears..
that's not good... mix it up a bit please.
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Ok now I know that your probably tired of me uploading my crap and I´m sorry if you don´t like it.
I´m not expecting anyone to appreciate my work, but I hope that you can give me some advice how to make thing better, so I can reach the weekly best...
Yeah
Oddler hit it right on the head, switch the piano up a little bit more, maybe add some random 16ths in there without changing up the slow pace of the song too much, it's all about balance.
Zn3tz responds:
Ok thanx but I don´t get what 16ths is....
Sry about that, I´m swedish so I´ll say thats why I don´t know.. :)
Piano too symetrical
Here's a tip...things that are symetrical sounding don't resonate as strongly as when you bring the rhythm and change it up to people. Same with drawing which is more what I know about. Needs to be a change in the tune when going into another measure of the piano part. Not sure if that makes sense.
I do like the guitars though and don't be too hard on yourself this tune sounds decent.
Zn3tz responds:
Ok thanx :)
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