Though I'm hearing TONS of presets, I really like how you made this. It's very chill, and everything flows together extremely well. One of the only major qualms that I have about this one is that it starts clipping a bit at 3:26, but everything else sounds very good. The other major one is the drums - I personally think that the clap could've been a bit softer, and that the hihat stand out just a little too much. Maybe cut the highs on it a little, or change it to a slightly softer sounding one. There's definitely room for some improvement, but I really like where this is going. Keep it up man!
I think this is perfect. It has good structure, chord progression, it's very rhythmic. Nothing sticks out, all the elements flows together perfectly. I love the first eight bars, the brass and bass created a really nice counter melody. The bass line is really nice and I love how it drops out in the middle and then pops back in. I admire that you faded out the ending without actually minimizing the volume, instead the different voices where pulled and created a nice fade out effect. This is definitely my new favorite song. Great work and thanks for sharing.
Thanx man....i really appreciate that. You gave a really nice critique for this song. It means a lot to me that i actually did a kickass job at this after three days.
Once again, thanx.
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