it wasnt that bad...
the song was alright, try to avoid using so much techno effect in your guitar playing, it sounds more like it could have been done on a piano... and please make the percussion more interresting! it was just 16th note after 16th note, and it made it kind of boring... but you should be able to do beter the more you experiment with differant sounds!
I know first song... and last
not that good..
I´m gonna be honest and say that this sounded like you just randomly entered notes. I know this is your first, but this really didn't sound very well. it could be that I'm wrong, but the randomness of it all, doesn't really appeal to me.
I'll give you a 5/10 for submitting it...
thanks for being honest
thank you for reviewing