I like the way your guitar sounds, what are you recording through?
I'd like to see this as a full song (4 or 5 riffs, harmonized solos would be cool, lyrics, of course...etc, etc.).
I consider myself a semi-decent vocalist, so if you write 'em, I'll sing/scream them, if you'd like.
Awesome work, and welcome to the metal side of the AP.
(I know you're not new, but this is your first really good metal submission, so I thought you could use another welcome.)