well i got to admit, for a demo it sounds alright. I cant think of anything this will need... but i was expecting the drums at 1:10 to end up being a bit louder or something... maybe a harder drum might fit... but thats just me. Anyways other then that it sounds fine to me. Good job! (definately sounds like a Suicide Commando song.)
:D sweet, I'm working on it right now..., I added drum changeups and I'm about to work on orchestras right now... also added lots of automation and a few filters :P
I also noticed the drums needed to be bigger, so I upped the highs and the mids a tad. sounds alot better so far... I'll upload the master track tonight!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.