I really like the main melody but after 40s, the bass seems to take over the whole song, dampening the main melody. At 1:10 until the drop at 1:45ish, it sounds super clean again and a lot nicer, having the piano (i think) in the foreground and the rolling bass as a nice addition. Try to create space for each instrument so nothing fights for space.
The idea is certainly there and i really like it, just work a bit more on the mixing and surely the next songs will be amazing!