pretty good remake
I like how you turned a cool classy tune to a nifty awesome techno trancing remake
Make more and have fun with it
sure thing... but it wasn't a remake... I wrote the melody myself when I was younger... unless some used the same things before I had... thad be coolio :D
Thnks, I will have fun with makin' moah :D
Awesome, I likes it much!
Indeed though, the pauses inbetween the parts of the song either needs to be shorter, or an uh... stretchy thingie should join them... hopw you understand what I mean :P (sorry, not a music person).
Overall, the music was nice to listen to, and quite a happy song. I also enjoy the ending with the bass and all. Awesome work :)
Yup, I know exactly what you mean for those breaks... though I haven't found a nice synth for it yet... still looking. Thknks man!
Quite liked the song, even though it was really like 3 songs. But I didn't like when one part started and ended, the structure of the song was completely put out of touch. It wasn't pretty to hear,but overall a better than average song. GOod job
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thnx, I'm thinking of better transitions as I type
A cool energy. Kinda loops. Racing/working.
This had me rocking and swaying whilst it was playing.
I got up for some dancing, but found myself slowing.
Maybe more beats would inspire my feet?
Maybe it's perfect for listening whilst working.
The beats early on are great. Later on though, they fade back a tad too much for my liking.
I think you could have come back in a bit earlier at the 1min mark.
I felt the tune really seemed to be running out of steam from 1:30-1:56. Maybe that could be cut back a bit.
I loved the switch-up at 1:57 and 2:12.
The last third of the tune sounds fantastic - little noises breaking up the melody. Cool beats.
My suggestion is basically to introduce a bit more variation into the 1:20-1:56 mark, maybe keep the beats going a bit more and maybe introduce some heavier beats.
A lot better than your other tune - I could really dance to this.
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thnx guy. well critiqued! Ya, that break at one min does seem long...
This is a very good song, its got a nice solid length, not too long and not too short, just long enough to keep the listener interested. Its got very cool varitaion throughout as well which helps, and there is a nice combination of instruments in it too. Very cool.
This is great and fast paced, i could listen to this a few times happily, nice melody throughout and im hopong to see more work this good from you. Keep it up.
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thnx. I'm workin' on more... slowly :P
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