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Its not from here(((REMIX))))

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yup its a remix.....if u havent heard the original....well burn!!!!!!....no just listen to it then listen to this...

basically used garage band at first for the original then used the same structure and remixed with fl



Try using a different set of instruments. The drum track you have in the beginning is a great start! For industrial, you want to keep it kind of lower/darker tone. Try using some of the stuff out of Sytrus like the PWM Saw and such. See what you can come up with. This is definitely a good start though, and I'm sure you can make it a great track with a little work. Your other stuff is really good, too!

grandman1023 responds:

hey really appreciate it and yeah ill keep that in mind next time i go industrail

this is nicer but...

the beats are nice and some instruments but the acid at the beggining of the track ia a bit high. it misses som background sound.,,the scratch is a bit annoying....but listen add some more speed.some filter on the acid..some beat loops at the background and some pad to fill in..its better than the other but i think you can make better.well just an opinion dont take it like an agression cus is not..peace

grandman1023 responds:

thanx appreciate the review ill try to make another

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Credits & Info

1.64 / 5.00

Apr 6, 2008
1:07 PM EDT
File Info
3.1 MB
3 min 22 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.