Reminds me of something from Halo ODST, which had a very harrowing piano soundtrack. And this song...I simply love. Its so beautiful and yet so dark and powerful it is simply perfect. I use it to write, so thank you for such an inspiring piece. Love it. 5 Stars.
If you'd ask me I'd say your songs could be a little longer.
It's always so soon that they're over ;)
This is incredible! One of my favorites! SO haunting, and emotional, and incredible! I love it!!!
beutiful melody..thought should write something
Not worth my tears....or my mascara
a smile now forced through
these lips, were so unspoken
i thought what you said was true but a fool like me would so believe
i dont understand
was this fun for you
a silly little joke
i should've known it was true
i remember it like it was just the other day
and i sat next to you
you spoke a few words to me
and my love for you grew
everything you said was a lie
stupid, unecessary, just like you
no longer beautiful
or fun to be around
what you wanted to tell
just doesn't cross my mind from what i found
your so not worth my tears
and yet i cray anyway
so not worth the mascara
i put on for you today
and yet i keep crying
the tears flow like rivers
unstoppable like you couldn't believe
i can't wait for this horrible pain to end
and for you to go and leave
you mean nothing
to me-your now just another crush
what i thaught we had
just doesnt mean much
i will not look at you at all
cuz everything that happened
is just making my world fall
If I made a movie out of the story that I've had running through my head for the last 4 odd years this would star several of the scenes. It carries the feeling of the title brilliantly and you've done a great job of building around the original melody, if you can you should orchestrate it, it'd come out really well.
This is a very personal song to me that I made, and I'm working on building upon this song right now and I'm curious to hear an idea for your story, maybe it will help Pm me.
Thanks for the review
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