beat sujestion

im not only gona sujest on the beat but to help fill in the emptyness at :17 after that break put in some kind of heavy extended pad synth at :35 kick up the beat a little add some accents to the begining of those kick beats then at :52 add a nice kinda up beat counter melody at 2:17 really kick up the beat and just go crazy with itand cool it down for the end like you already did anso try changeing the melody a bit more its a bit repetitive

Yeah I'm really feeling this

Sounds good so far. If you made this, you should be able to make some more stuff better ;D
Check my stuff out too for examples maybe? Idk, but check them out if you have time.

Awesome

It sounds awesome.Nice Job,and keep up the good work!