I didn't like it.
Congrats on your first track!
The sound coming out of my speakers boarder lines with the sound that comes from a public bathroom when a 300 pound constipated man is taking a crap.
The levels are really low and it sounds like you recorded it to mono. The actual song itself is more techno than anything, but good job on the lyrics. Maybe you can should work on clarity now.
Well thanks for viewing, this is a really old song, I've gotten a lot better.....
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And your review made me laugh, it's so true :D