GX3-Manga Girl

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This is my third song, sounds more like a type of club music...I probably messed quite alot in it, just wanted to take a look at reviews and feedback.


I'm giving ya a 4.

You have some really good sounds coming out of the speakers. The drum beat is nice, the intro is nice, and the guitar is nice.

Here is where you are making mistakes.
The intro never changes.
The keyboard has no coherence to the rest of the song.
The drum beat doesn't change either.

I really liked the Guitar!! And the intro has a nice quality to it. You might want to keep what you have here and advance on it.

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GAT-X3000 responds:

Lol, you sound pretty enthousiastic, thanks a lot for your good points, but it kinda surprised me u put a 4, with all those good points, but ur the rater here, I'm not.
Thnx again bro

Good try

I'm not an expert, but I can tell this is like one of your first songs.
I know my self on how hard it can be starting out, learning about programs
and music in general.

Well first off you have an ok beat, but the melody is repetitive and its not in SNK
with the beat. Trust me when i say this, don't start off your first beats using the
guitar because it is very hard to not make it sound repetitive especially if its an generic sound font. the part where it sounds like your using an E piano doesn't really add to the mix.
Try this, in stead of just using two note's in your melody with the Guitar, try four or five notes. then after about 8 Bars try using the mixer and adding effects to it , so it wont sound so repetitive. Also keep in mind that when you make a beat people then to get board after a while so try changing it up a bit.

anyway good luck

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GAT-X3000 responds:

Wow, Ok I'm gonna try wat u said there, thats one hell of a helpful review u got there, although they're are certain things I don't know about, but hey I'm here to learn, so I'll see what I can come up too.
Thnx again bro


that constant sound realy pissed me of for the first minute or so

and it got realy repetetive

GAT-X3000 responds:

Ok, well thats a start lol, yeah I thought it was a little repetitive too, I gotta fix a few things here and there too...
sorry if I destroyed ur ears... but thnx alot for ur feedback.

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0.86 / 5.00

Apr 5, 2008
9:27 AM EDT
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1.7 MB
1 min 55 sec

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