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This is "Alone", the first song I've ever created in my life.
I know it isn't long, I may make it longer.

Please tell me what you think of it, I would be very happy.
Be sincere and tell me everything.

I played this song originally on my piano, and I added the Cello on the computer.

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Great Start!!

I commend you on focusing on the melody first. Now we need to do something about your ambiance. I'm not sure what kind of software or equipment you have but I'd recommend finding a good reverb plugin somewhere and adding that to the piano. The sound dies out too quickly and leaves nothing to replace it. The cello part was a good idea to help the song progress, but the track as a whole could use some more elements,,,maybe a wind instrument or some full strings. After that it's really all about your ability to make a song speak, and that I'm afraid I can't help you with bro. Keep working on it though caus it sounds like you get the idea of what composing is all about.


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Pankee responds:

Thanks a lot for the review Reasoner!
I used the software "Finale Songwriter" which is great for composing.
I will work on the song and add, like you said, a wind instrument and a violin (maybe).

I really appreciate your review =)
Thanks for helping me Reasoner, I wish I could be as good as you for composing.

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Pankee
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703
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4.01 / 5.00

Uploaded
Apr 5, 2008
7:52 AM EDT
Genre
Classical
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1.4 MB
1 min 33 sec

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