True, the recording quality isn't awesome...

but it also ain't bad.

This has potential, but unfortunately is a bit repetitive without lyrics.

Something you want would be low, growly lyrics to fit with this- I think it'd be awesome.

Anyways, I love metal. I can't play the guitar, and while this isn't the most complicated, it shows that you're competent.

Is the drums drum machine or live drummer? What's your recording setup?

You could take this somewhere. :D