It's like nothing I've ever heard from you, and yet it very much is your gig! Solid instrumentation, great structure, and driving rhythm section.

Vocal FX are great and I don't have a problem with the volume for the most part. Occasionally they're running rough shod over everything, but that's primarily on the prechorus. I would recommend more compression on the master or simply to mix in 32 bit floating point (with dithering) and turn things up until you feel that A, the levels are all still balanced, and B, there's just a little peaking on the limiter. Just a little. Export and see how you like it. The 32 floating will keep it from truly clipping, and you'll get a pretty dynamic mix (seems to be your goal here!) that is competitively loud.

The result is otherwise very balanced. I find it hard to pay attention to the lyrics because my attention span is that of a goldfish, but thanks to you providing them, I can tell you that they're great in terms of theme and flow. And as I listened, your performance is great. Every line rolls off the tongue.

Ps, props to your dad! I wish I could do music with my parents!

8.6/10

Yoo it's good! Are those your vocals?

Impressive.

Awesome track! Bass guitar part is very cool!
For my taste seems that chorus part should be louder. And propably overall vocals are to loud.

absolutely smashin! love dat guitar solo had me smiling like a crackhead da hole time. ill be rootin 4 ya in da audio deathmatch