Hehe I can feel the "rap"
I can still feel the rap feel you meant to give it If you do change your mind on it all you gotta do is take out the ringing bell like sounds and replace it with some bass :P
You know, thats not a bad idea. I still believe it has the posibility to be a rap song, i mean i love how the bass turned out and how the beat changes from time to time. However, i still like it the way it is. To me it just seems like words dont need to be made.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.