I just got a new music program and thought I would learn it through trial and this was the first song I made on it. I hope to get better with time and create some original work. Let me know what ya'll think.
Well notbad
This was notbad the melody was decent but could be smoother and this whole piece could be longer but honestly you have a good mixture and some decent variety it was pretty good and live the flavor on this hope you make more like this some day it's awsome stuff
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Awesome ad more to this
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It's a good try, but the melody is just off in too many places for me too count. Not bad for a first try, though.
its good but....
please add the words..... ive looked all over ng
and couldnt find the originall version. so add sum words
please.
this is a terrible version
too slow, the tone is low, it has the tune of the song, but the style is as if a troll chewed up the song, spit it out, and used it to wipe himself. yuck. The general sound of the song is too low,it would be nice for a slow dance mix, or something close to that, but it doest met my satisfaction.
Well...
it was a nice try but it lacked the same beat and actual theme to the song. and the tune was off. i suggest trying heavy (er?) beats. that is all. sry.
I had it playing at a slightly faster tempo than the original. I tried putting words in it at first, but the program I have doesn't like words too much.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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