I like the groovy guitar at the beginning. It’s a bit disorienting how the volume levels seem to vary so much chord-to-chord, though. The vocals are really smooth, and also sit really well in the mix, although at times they could use a little more decoration - i.e., reverb and other mixing effects. The lyrics themselves are good too, and I like the added portamento bass at :44. The instrumental track could use some more variety - maybe a breakdown or solo or something at some point. Some more ebb and flow (automation, filtering, etc.) within the phrases would also help create some more variety. That said, I really like the sound design, rhythmic content, and flow of this one. Keep at it, RennZ! ^_^

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.75/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
1/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.75/2
Instrumentation and sound design
1/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.5/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
1/1
Composite score
8.25/10