deserving of a review
or two, or three hundred.
When the bass drum goes solo, before the chords are played, it sounds too empty and a little rushed. Work with some more hi-hat/snare fills. They are more realistic sounding and offer alot more of varation possiblities. The bass type guitar sound should either be played during the entire piece, or you should write an entire bass part over the entire song.
haha, the drum fills after two min were so random. Some crazy ass effects were going on after that part too. Mainly the reverse cymbol, sounded sweet. At 3 min you should introduce a snare hit on the down beats, would make it sound more climactic and would tie it up nicely.
Anyways, good job. If you could check out my latest submission, it would be greatly apreciated...