This was really neat.
I like it. However, I feel it could have been better if you added a little more texture and rhythm. While listening I felt potential for a really cool moving bass line and counter melody. This was really cool to listen and thank you for sharing.
Wow, thanks for the thorough review! Having my work examined makes me do the happy dance!
Yeah, I have to admit, this song is a bit ambient and skeletal by nature. I might tinker with adding a bit more foreground. If I stumble upon something that sounds cool, I'll be sure to upload it for you!