The only thing really off is the hi hat...
I understand what mood you were going for but...=/
i've redone this check my traks n it'll be the top 1 ;)
What in all the world made you put it in that off beat seperate hat during the opening drum section.
That was a very very bad move. If you ever edit that then let me know, because its the only thing between you and a perfect 10/5.
The Breakbeat is flawless. Really no use attacking anything but the off hat/crash.
Having had that criticism, now read this. Remove the hat, and this is the best fluid Drum N Bass piece ive heard on Newgrounds. Hands down. And ive heard quite a few.
Fantastically brilliant form. Except that off hat.
P.S You dont happen to listen to SquarePusher do you?
If not, you may want to start.
no i havnt but i'll have a check.
yeh i'll take it out i thought it was off.
I'll post again when its closer to finished
It flowed really nicely, the pads and whatnot were cool, but the off beat hat sounded out of place and the drums need a bit of work rhythmically, mainly the fills but other than that good work
full thing should be mint