It wasn't too bad. I think if you can do this you can do better. I see you're using garageband so I'm glad your not using loops like others... but I enjoy using garageband also so you might be able to learn something from me:
thought i might return the favour after you dropped a comment on one of my songs..
I see DJ Ses is giving you generous advice.. here mine..
. You use Garage Band?.. try work on the drum timing.. or maybe try to FL Studio and build a music studio from there.
. Try to work on gettin an epic melody, and a solid bassline.
. use orchestral sounds, such as Edirol Orchestra thats got some kick ass sounds..
. Make a solid structure cos dis song is a bit loose..
sorry if thats a bit harsh man..just trying to give u some advice on how to improve..:)
-¦- CKC -¦-
thanks a bunch for the advices, even though I'll probably leave music making behind, and continue my scenario writing...
Thanks again bro, cheers,
10 for effort bruh! =D
in hip hop.. the drumset is sometimes, or most the time the strong point of a song.
I say if you practice your drumsets a little more, you could make a pretty good hip hop track. Also, try using a different selection of instruments. Like what I mess with sometimes is brass, organ, strings, and synths. You got much more to learn (but don't we all?) but bruh.. keep making hip hop songs.. dont stop!! i will support yea and help you out the best i can for each track.
Oh man, this is too much, I don't know what to say, you just made me want to do more hip hop, and this is too generous, a 10!? Wow, thats something, plus your review is super helpfull, thnx a bunch for dat, and your also willing to help me, like I said this is too much, but man your da best: B-E-S-T!
Like they say in french "merci mille fois"
Respect to you too