GX3-4 Mistakes

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A little something I've been working on for a while now, I put it in Hip Hop, cuz thats what most of the song is, with a little techno part in da middle. Rate fairy plz, it's only my second song, oh and comment too!


eh..not bad

It wasn't too bad. I think if you can do this you can do better. I see you're using garageband so I'm glad your not using loops like others... but I enjoy using garageband also so you might be able to learn something from me:
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Hey yo

thought i might return the favour after you dropped a comment on one of my songs..

I see DJ Ses is giving you generous advice.. here mine..

. You use Garage Band?.. try work on the drum timing.. or maybe try to FL Studio and build a music studio from there.
. Try to work on gettin an epic melody, and a solid bassline.
. use orchestral sounds, such as Edirol Orchestra thats got some kick ass sounds..
. Make a solid structure cos dis song is a bit loose..

sorry if thats a bit harsh man..just trying to give u some advice on how to improve..:)

-¦- CKC -¦-

GAT-X3000 responds:

Hey man,
thanks a bunch for the advices, even though I'll probably leave music making behind, and continue my scenario writing...
Thanks again bro, cheers,


10 for effort bruh! =D

in hip hop.. the drumset is sometimes, or most the time the strong point of a song.
I say if you practice your drumsets a little more, you could make a pretty good hip hop track. Also, try using a different selection of instruments. Like what I mess with sometimes is brass, organ, strings, and synths. You got much more to learn (but don't we all?) but bruh.. keep making hip hop songs.. dont stop!! i will support yea and help you out the best i can for each track.


GAT-X3000 responds:

Oh man, this is too much, I don't know what to say, you just made me want to do more hip hop, and this is too generous, a 10!? Wow, thats something, plus your review is super helpfull, thnx a bunch for dat, and your also willing to help me, like I said this is too much, but man your da best: B-E-S-T!

Like they say in french "merci mille fois"
Respect to you too

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1.17 / 5.00

Apr 2, 2008
6:44 AM EDT
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
1.2 MB
1 min 21 sec

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