Either the intro is too long, or it needs more build up. If your intro is almost the entire song, then its too long. But it still needs a little more poured in.
Not finishing this one, search the Author Bjra for a new look on the melody. This song is scrapped.
Artists like you are one of the reasons I train harder everyday...Even though I may never be as good as you, among others, it never hurts to try.
Anyways, 10/10, 5/5, favorited and downloaded. Not much more I can do, since your already on my favorite artists list. >_>
Maybe I should make Fulp put this song all over the ng? =D
Why get fulp to listen to a song that isn't complete.
you are good at what you do make song loger make it bit faster and add 1 to 2 more layers and you will be a goddly song
Do an Author search for Bjra and you will the melody redone in our little "Vs" song.
this is just awesome the only problem is that this song should be 10 minutes long not only one .
Demo of a song I won't finish :P.
Yes you do need more build-up. Do not do random sounds unless you're absolutely sure you can pull them together. Maybe make it a little more smooth at the 1:04 mark, this may seem odd at first but trust me you'll have more to build on.
I've been doing alot of revamping to the build ups. the second build up has changed a fair amount to the one thats up here now. Thanks for the review.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.