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Mar 31, 2008 | 3:25 PM EDT
File Info
1.3 MB
1 min 27 sec
3.43 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 3.43 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
607 Plays | 80 Downloads
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Author Comments

Trying new things with a FL SLAYER

no, I don't know how to properly write a song with a bridge and etc, but I'm willing to learn if anyone wants to teach...enjoy.



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad

Everyone here is used to crazy crap made by amazing people, so don't be put down. Try adding more tracks, or in other terms, more sounds at once. The melody is pretty good, but it doesn't have enough variation through the song. Its also short, which puts people off no matter how good the song is. If you dont want to make some huge song, just enginner the ending so it loops well, people like songs they can work to etc.

Good luck!

HeliosStar responds:

Wow! thanks, I haven't made music in a while but You've just help inspire me back into trying :].


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Makign a bridge isn't that hard...

You know what would make creating a bridge easier?

Write lyrics...and then the sound will come to you through the lyrics because you should already know what you want the song to sound like based on the lyrics...

I hope that didn't confuse you XD.

You did good with this though!


HeliosStar responds:

Many thanks, I've actually got a really good song written, what I meant is I don't know the technicalities of songwriting...I don't really even know what a bridge is XD.