I think it's very rhythmic and inspiring. I only have a couple of problems with it. One, is that there's no lower voice and it sounds very airy. You should put a bass voice in it to add some weight and balance. I also think you could make the drum part a little more interesting, the quarter note hits on the open high-hat get kind of annoying. If you've got this track with vocals then I would to hear how that came out. Great work and thanks for sharing.
I love this, its real good dude nice job.