not bad since you're only starting out.
i listened to the other one you posted, that was bad... you went crazy with the background noise and that hurt the song. i would say since you're not putting that much melody it the songs you really need to work on what you have- pads and drums with occasional sfx. master them. press F9 when you're in FL. if you have more questions about that PM me...
:no rating
-crepth