i like it, but this song is too soft on volume and the melody needs to be MUCH lowder.
There's little I can do at the moment about the volume...but I know that most of my tracks are too quiet. And I think I know what you mean by when the melody needs to get louder...like the individual parts of the different melodies that shine through to really form the song's melodies should be emphasized in the mixing, and I'll definitely keep that in mind while I'm working on the next one. Thanks for the review.
... it was really good seeing that you recorded all this yourself but a couple of the bass notes were cut a little short. that made it sound a little sketchy. but all around it was pretty good.
Alright...I think the guitar is really the main offender of that here, but I certainly get your point.
Thanks for the review.
It sounded a lil bit off-time, but its obvious you recorded so I give you props for that. The piano was the main feature in this song, but it got really repetetive. At the end around 3 min, you definatly need to improvise on the melody. The bass showed the most diversity in the beginning, and played straight quarters for the rest of the time. Its alot easier to move the song around with a diverse bass. The drums had a lot of power at certain points in the song.
I think I was most fond of the pads and effects you had in the quiter sections. The sound quality of the guitar was lacking, some notes ended aburptly and were off-time. Nice use of panning throughout the song. The synth hits at the end were pretty sweet too.
Gotta run! Peace
Yeah, I think it's pretty clear here that I still can't really play guitar. But after so many takes, I ended up taking it as long as it sounded good, which is probably awful laziness, but I hadn't finished anything in a month and I really wanted something that I could listen to through and feel like it was complete.
I never really considered the piano to be the main feature of the song, and I know it gets repetitive, so I could definitely change that up.
Thanks for the great review.