This is a nice track, I like the song. It's not quite as high octane as I am used to for techno which is simultaneously a good thing and a bad thing. Did you use garage band to make this? I think I recognize a number of loops from there, but they were used well. I can tell you've been mixing for a while.
I think maybe if you added something else to make the song pop out more, give it more depth, you'd have a way more successful song here. (The ending is kind of abrupt as well).
Quite an original piece of work, doesn't get boring, great job.
Thanks, and yes I used some modified garageband loop tracks.