Quality's bad

You really gotta fix the quality. Get better recording stuff for the instruments and vocals... please. The guitar sounded out of tune at parts.

Hmmm

I admire you used real instruments and not a keyboard.

Vocals are decent. I would rate higher if I liked the song more lawlz. Everything behind it is pretty good though.

btw, did you write the song or is this from a band? Anyway, nice job.