Very outside the box, no?
Could be better if you removed some of the "static" half way in the song. Although, it wouldn't sound as abstract. I think either way it's OK.
You have something in there I can see. Not sure if you should work with the music part of it and remove some of the sounds....or add more sounds and make it a bit more artsyish. Anyway, it's decent.
Thank you for your kind review.