This is great
Hey man I really respect the lyrics and your emotion in the track but I do have a couple of complaints lol. First I think the actual beat overpowered your vocals so you should have turned your vocals up a little bit more. Now as for your voice, don't strain it so much, you should calm down a little bit because I can hear your voice kind of weird out a little bit, it's hard to explain. I'm not saying to completely take your emotion out of it, but tone it down just a little bit. Everything else I think is great, your lyrics delivery and flow were something different from what I typically hear. Stay up man.