With this song you really showed your growing, you really have the feeling for ambient man!
Awesome, Next step to master AMBIENCY >=]
Sounds pretty good- the percussion really adds to the creepy atmosphere of it. It's what does most of the track in my opinion. Good thing you're using a lot of different sounds, so it becomes more exciting. It's mixed almost perfectly with the deep, bassy pad, but I think that pad - all pads and keys in the track actually - should be louder, for atmosphere's sake.
That voice's nice, how'd ya get that one? Got anyone to sing it for you, or did you just grab a sample or what? I'd love to hear more of it, especially in that empty part with pretty much nothing but fx. And for that part- most of the middle, almost half of the song- I feel it's a bit minimalist. Could really need a bit more dark synths and whatnot- even just another subtle pad could help heaps.
watch out for the clipping (in places like 2:18)
Well good, it's def. a good song with fantastic atmosphere, just needs a little more meat on the bone here and there. Sry for being late ;P
Oh dude please dont be srry bout bein late. Im just terrifically content that you responded. Its a great deal of inspiration im getting from your music so most thanks go to you. The voice i rendered in that tone with a synthesiser from a soundloop. The rest i did by hand. I also think i let the feel drop a bit too much. Anywho thanks alot I appreciate the help ^_^.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.