It echos a lot and gives no room to breath. I really like the peice and i really want to hear a clean version of this peice.some parts can go with out the echo or sustain which ever one you were using for it. If you can, remove the echo and maybe just add some strings to it, it would probally creat something similare to this one, but a lot less head ach trying to keep up with the song. Keep it clean and simple for easy listening. Great work, keep up. Message me again when you have a cleaner version of this i really want to hear it, there is a lot of poteintal here.

Alittle rought, you'll have to smoothen it