hmm not sure this is better than the first version....perhaps a bit too long. The transition to ur 2 new synths (2 minute-ish)is bit long also. I dont like the fact that ur main sound is there for the whole song: it gets really repetitive. It's a nice try, but the song would've been better shorter or a change of main beat in the 2 minute-ish wouldve done the trick too. Not so bad, but needs improvements. Keep up ur efforts Foster. One day u'll be a king in the domain.