This is the 3rd song of yours I checked out. You have a theme to your music which I like. It's got a natural vibe to it which is awesome. I feel this piece of music is lacking a bit of content though. Maybe try experimenting with expanding the world of the song and making a bit more happen in it. All in all though, I think this is pretty good and could be great with a bit touching up here and there.
7/10 + 5/5
Pretty cool all the DJ's near me arnt good so its nice to hear a good one ;)
Still not pop but a much better song than the last one so it gets a decent score this time :)