Not what I was expecting
You've pretty much taken the Crank Dat drum sound and added it to a deep bass line with claps and some odd synth sound. When I heard it, it didn't make me think of Metal at all, it reminded me more of Soulja Boy.
Try being more original next time, and get a grungier guitar sound, maybe drop out the island-sounding crank dat drums and laying in a clap-snap combo.
add some fucked up vocals and your rolling with 50cent
seriously, without vocals it is a little repetitive
but cool, overall
i was expecting the genre
i was expecting the genre to be hip-hop but some how you messed up metal and hip-hop. i really don't think thats a good mix. the whole song is just a loop only adding 2 instruments. try doing only 1 genre next time
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.