I like the beat and the lyrics is alright, but the first guy needs to work on his flow a little, second guy is pretty good, has good flow. Overall, it was good, yall got lots of potential. Ignore the haterz, my shits been 0 bombed already today, and it was only up for 30 mins.
yea i hear you, and ill be sure to tell Stevie B. (the first guy in the song) to work on his flow a bit. and yea this song is what its meant for, to filter out the haters who want to 0 bomb and stuff, but basically what you should do is, well, just laugh at them. its newgrounds, so just laugh at those zero bombers cuz basically there jealous that your better than them haha. but anyways, thanx for the good review and the constructive criticism...we'll be sure to make improvements by the time we record again. peace
Love the instrumental. Best lyric was when you told the haters off with the "you dont like my music you can kiss my ass"
- Big Bad Lejin
ayo thanx lejin.
2 ya face son...
wack... its actually funny. Wtf are you so mad about?
Lots of hate in that spit
Hate and hate is fire on fire. Never dies until the gas runs out.
Anyway, I think it lacks variation. You can rap, but it's not enough if you want more people to listen. It needs to stay interesting, and the average person has a short attention span.
I know it's hard to rap, and coming up with rhymes takes a lot of effort. I suggest that there would be half-time and double-time raps in between to keep things interesting.
Hope this would help.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.