you idiots that wrote a reviews for this song need to get your but out there make a song and i bet it well be 5 times worse SO JUST SHUT UP IDIOTS IT IS HARD TO MAKE SONGS YOU IDIOTS
guy down here said everything! try improve your instrumentals and tempo
Sorry, but no.
I'm really sorry, but everything is so out of time. You can't just mash random beats here and there. It doesn't sound right. The melody part wasn't half bad, but it just repeats an indefinite amount of times. Go listen to some other songs, then go listen to your own songs. You'll understand once you hear other song's percussion parts.
Better luck next time.
Thanx for the advice! i m just starting to get a hang of this software so all comments are good comments at this point. also, please check out my other songs, repost!
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