very good song man just work on the bass
good song brother
he is my brother good song except the fuzz and in time
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I don't usually do shit like this, but you should check out my latest song. It's an industrial style track, and, as someone just told me a few minutes ago, how to use fruityloops and not sound like a newb.
Great idea for a beat though.
if you have any info on how to use this fruity crap it would be useful. thanks for the review
Once again, no.
First off, the bass part doesn't needs fixing... yet. The main problem seems to be all the kicks and snares and hi hats. You need to tone down on them. And also put them in time. It'd be better if you can follow a specific time signature, instead of dropping random hits of the kick or snare.
Once again, go look up some songs, then listen to your own song.
Better luck next time.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.